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Thursday, 6 July 2017

Show Not tell.

WALT use Alliteration and Similes in our writing. We have been learning to put Alliteration and Similes in our writing to make is more interesting. Challenging to put a doc on the blog. Enjoyed Finding something to describe in my writing. Show not tell I heard the bird Tweeting like a trumpet. I saw the bird flapping his wings as fast as lightning. Head thinking if I don’t catch this delicious bird I will be furious, Infuriated and irritated. Will I catch this delicious, delightful and delectable bird? Or will I lose him? The End

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